difficult going

hello everyone, I do not know about the rest of you, but I am having a difficult time revising my rough draft. Sometimes the things I write make perfect sense and then I read the draft again and it sounds fuddled. I have also had difficulty getting some things from the library. I am really fired up about my topic and would like to let the US know how much better off the whole country would be if we would encourage breastfeeding. I think that infant formula has its place as a suppliment to breast feeding but there are so many good things for a mom and her baby to have the nursing experience. Good luck to all with your efforts to produce a well written paper.